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Tim Moore

176 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 90 / 100
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Claims 64%Positioning 19%The ask 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 99 wordstoday I rise on a sad occasion but to honor the life and the service of Ashley Moore of my home county, Cleveland County, North Carolina, who tragically passed away just one day after celebrating her 37th birthday.1 On July 6 of this year while Ashley was a paramedic with the Cleveland County EMS, 23while she and her team were responding to an emergency, an impaired driver struck the ambulance from behind, injuring the patient, another paramedic, 4and unfortunately, killing Ashley.5 Ashley served Cleveland County for 9 years as a paramedic, a field training officer, 67and an EMS instructor.8 Positioning · 12 wordsShe dedicated her life to caring for others with compassion and professionalism.Positioning Claims · 13 wordsEvery day, first responders put themselves in harm’s way to protect their communities, Positioning · 22 wordsand Ashley embodied the very best of that calling, putting the needs of others before her own until her very final moments.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 30 wordsI ask that my colleagues in the House join me in praying that God will bring comfort and strength to Ashley’s family and her fellow first responders during this time.

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