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Michael Baumgartner

205 words · 8 sentences · 12 clauses

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Average 86 / 100
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Greeting 16%Claims 66%Thanks 11%Promise 6%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 33 wordsI rise today to honor a former Washington State University athletic director, Bill Moos, and highlight his outstanding new book, ``Crab Creek Chronicles: 4From the Wheat Fields to the Ball Fields and Beyond.’’Greeting Claims · 116 wordsBill Moos was a star football player for WSU in the early 1970s and later took a job as the student assistant football coach in 1973.1 After holding various jobs, he returned to WSU as the assistant athletic director. His career skyrocketed after that as he became the athletic director and oversaw the rise of two major universities, Montana and Oregon.2 Bill was a storyteller shaped by the land of eastern Washington and a family that has deep roots in both agriculture and politics. His new book is a memoir of faith, family, and wonderful moments of the sport, including the time that he brought my good friend and WSU legend Mike Leach to the Palouse.3 Madam Speaker, Thanks · 23 wordsI congratulate Bill on his many years of service to Cougar athletics and in this exciting new chapter of his life--even in retirement.Thanks Madam Speaker, Claims · 20 wordsI will also note that Bill Moos is a Cougar legend that should be in the WSU Hall of Fame, Promise · 13 wordsand I look forward to seeing him receive that distinct honor very soon.

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