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Michael Baumgartner

206 words · 8 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 91 / 100
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Greeting 9%Claims 89%Thanks 2%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 19 wordsI rise today to honor a Gonzaga men’s basketball legend, Domantas Sabonis, and his significant contribution to Gonzaga University.Greeting Claims · 183 wordsSabonis starred at Gonzaga in 2014 to 2015, before embarking on an outstanding NBA career.1 Recently, Sabonis provided the school with a transformative gift and had the program’s basketball strength and conditioning center named after him in a dedication ceremony last week.2 The Sabonis Family Strength and Conditioning Center will serve as a training foundation for Bulldog basketball student-athletes, supporting year-round strength development, injury prevention, and recovery and performance optimization. The ceremony was held on Thursday afternoon in front of an invited audience of donors, alumni, student-athletes, 3and university leadership, where Sabonis and Coach Mark Few both spoke. ``This is a significant gift from a remarkable family, 4and we are deeply grateful to their generosity,’’ said Coach Few. ``Their investment will have a lasting impact on student-athletes and help ensure future generations of Bulldogs have every opportunity to grow and succeed.’’5 The three-time all-star and two-time all-NBA Third Team selection led the NBA in rebounds over previous seasons.6 He has made a significant contribution to the NBA and now has a lasting legacy at Gonzaga, one that will benefit future generations of Bulldogs. Thanks · 4 wordsWell done, Mr. Sabonis.Thanks

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