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Michael Baumgartner

313 words · 14 sentences · 18 clauses

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Average 86 / 100
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Greeting 7%Claims 75%Thanks 18%

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Madam Speaker, Greeting · 23 wordsI rise today to honor a legend and the life of a legend, Washington State University Coach Jim Walden, who passed away recently.Greeting Claims · 235 wordsCoach Walden served as the Cougars head football coach from 1978- 1986.1 From the time he took over between the 1977 and 1978 seasons, he was not one to hold back as a coach, and neither was his Cougar football team. The Cougs displayed many of the same characteristics Jim exhibited, including a passion for the sport and an outspoken and charismatic personality. Taking the reins after WSU had three coaches in 3 years, Jim Walden assured the Cougar faithful he would not only stay around, but he would stay around and build a winning team. Four years later, he guided WSU to its first bowl game in many years, the 1981 Holiday Bowl.2 That was WSU’s first post-season game since 1931.3 Jim delivered on his promises while defeating nearly every team in the PAC-10 conference. He finished his 9-year stint with 44 wins, at that time the second most among Washington State’s all-time list, 4while also being named PAC-10 Coach of the Year twice, once in 1981 and again in 1983.5 After retiring from coaching in 1994, Jim showed his Crimson pride by returning to the Palouse, 6where he served as Bob Robertson’s broadcast sidekick for 11 seasons.7 Jim Walden was inducted into the WSU Athletic Hall of Fame in 2009 and the University of Wyoming Athletic Hall of Fame in 2011 for his play as a quarterback when he was a student there.8 Madam Speaker, Thanks · 55 wordsI commend Coach Jim Walden for his unwavering passion for Cougar athletics and his lasting commitment to the game of football. His leadership helped shape the proud tradition and identity of Cougar football that generations, including myself, have known and cherished. Jim Walden will be deeply missed and his legacy will continue to inspire Cougs.ThanksVague promise

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