Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Earl L. "Buddy" Carter

156 words · 6 sentences · 9 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 13%Claims 71%Thanks 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 20 wordsI rise today to recognize Fred Gretsch, a resident of Pooler, Georgia, and to wish him a happy 80th birthday.1Greeting Claims · 110 wordsFred is the fourth generation of his family to lead Gretsch, the storied musical instrument manufacturer founded in Brooklyn in 1883 by his great-grandfather, Friedrich Gretsch, a German immigrant.23 In 1984, Fred and his wife, Dinah, bought the company back into family hands and built it into the world-renowned name it is today, known for that great Gretsch sound.4 Gretsch instruments have shaped American music played by George Harrison, Elvis Presley, Chet Atkins, and Charlie Watts, among many others. Since bringing the company home to Georgia’s First District, Fred and Dinah have generously supported music education, including establishing the Fred and Dinah Gretsch School of Music at Georgia Southern University.5 Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 26 wordson behalf of Georgia’s First District, I congratulate Fred Gretsch on 80 remarkable years and thank him for his contributions to American music, craftsmanship, and philanthropy.Thanks

Analyzed on