Analysis · Floor speech · beta

George Latimer

216 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 70 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 27%Claims 53%Reasoning 10%Promise 10%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 29 wordsI rise today to recognize New York Blood Center and all community blood centers across the United States that ensure a stable blood supply for patients in our hospitals.Thanks Claims · 84 wordsBlood can only come from generous donors, and patients in need are relying on volunteers to roll up their sleeves and give them the gift of life. But right now, the New York Blood Center is in its second blood emergency of the summer, signaling critically low levels of blood supply that exists for the State.1 In the United States, someone needs blood every 2 seconds, 2and while more than 60 percent are eligible to donate blood, only about 3 percent of Americans do.3 Reasoning · 21 wordsIf just 1 percent more volunteers donated blood, we could alleviate the blood shortages that endanger the blood supply each season.Vague promise Thanks · 30 wordsI thank the millions of Americans who already regularly donate blood and encourage others to join them. Moreover, I commend the work being done at the New York Blood Center, ThanksClaims · 31 wordswhich has been serving the tristate area for more than 60 years and today serves more than 200 hospitals and EMS partners with more than half a million lifesaving blood products.45 Promise · 21 wordsTogether, we can work to ensure that no matter when a person needs it, there will be blood available to them.Vague promise

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