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The average of Signal, Relevance and Clarity is 49. The grade is held to 30, 30 above Relevance.
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
Signal
48 / 100
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Relevance
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Reasoning
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Respect
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Clarity
100 / 100
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Thanks 25% Claims 49% Positioning 26%
Structure · 12 steps
Claims · 5
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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 18 words I rise today to recognize Martha Mendoza for 25 years of dedicated service to the people of Kansas.5 Thanks Claims · 76 words In July 2001, Martha began working for Senator Pat Roberts in his Dodge City office.1 Over the next two decades, she earned the trust of Kansans across the region and ultimately served as Senator Roberts’ district director for 8 years.2 When I was elected to Congress in 2021, Senator Roberts personally recommended I hire Martha because he knew her character, her work ethic, 3 and the genuine care she brings to every Kansan who asks for help. Thanks · 35 words I am grateful that she agreed to continue her service as my constituent services director. Today, Martha still works in the same Dodge City office where she began her public service career 25 years ago.4 Thanks Claims · 27 words During that time, she has helped countless Kansans navigate Federal agencies, resolve difficult casework, and find answers during some of the most stressful moments of their lives. Positioning · 22 words Martha works long hours, follows through, and treats every person who calls her or walks through the door with dignity and compassion. Positioning Claims · 9 words She understands that public service is about helping people, Positioning · 14 words and she has spent her career putting others’ lives in front of her own. Positioning Claims · 13 words Martha is a trusted colleague, a devoted mother of Joe, Gio, and Alexyss, Positioning · 12 words and a tireless advocate for the people of the Big First District. Positioning Thanks · 12 words I thank Martha for her 25 years of faithful service to Kansans. Thanks Positioning · 18 words Our State is better because of her work and I am honored to have her on our team. Positioning Off point
At a glance
Lost points for Off point ×18 Positioning ×5 Thanks ×4
Off topic None of this speech addressed the bill under debate and what it would change.
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Signal · 48
9 of 27 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I rise today to recognize Martha Mendoza for 25 years of dedicated service to the people of Kansas.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I am grateful that she agreed to continue her service as my constituent services director.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Today, Martha still works in the same Dodge City office where she began her public service career 25 years ago.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Martha works long hours, follows through,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and treats every person who calls her or walks through the door with dignity and compassion.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and she has spent her career putting others’ lives in front of her own.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and a tireless advocate for the people of the Big First District.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I thank Martha for her 25 years of faithful service to Kansans.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Our State is better because of her work and I am honored to have her on our team.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · 0
18 of 27 deductions are Relevance
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “I rise today to recognize Martha Mendoza for 25 years of dedicated service to the people of Kansas.” The clause is a tribute to a staff member, not about the highway act.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “In July 2001, Martha began working for Senator Pat Roberts in his Dodge City office.” The clause recounts personal history unrelated to the highway act.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Over the next two decades, she earned the trust of Kansans across the region and ultimately served as Senator Roberts’ district director for 8 years.” The clause describes a staffer’s career, not the bill’s subject.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “When I was elected to Congress in 2021, Senator Roberts personally recommended I hire Martha because he knew her character, her work ethic,” The clause concerns a hiring recommendation, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and the genuine care she brings to every Kansan who asks for help.” The clause praises an individual’s character, off the bill’s subject.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “I am grateful that she agreed to continue her service as my constituent services director.” The clause is about a staff appointment, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Today, Martha still works in the same Dodge City office where she began her public service career 25 years ago.” The clause describes a staffer’s workplace, unrelated to the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “During that time, she has helped countless Kansans navigate Federal agencies, resolve difficult casework,” The clause describes casework, not the highway act.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and find answers during some of the most stressful moments of their lives.” The clause praises constituent service, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Martha works long hours, follows through,” The clause describes a staffer’s work habits, off the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and treats every person who calls her or walks through the door with dignity and compassion.” The clause praises personal qualities, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “She understands that public service is about helping people,” The clause reflects on public service generally, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and she has spent her career putting others’ lives in front of her own.” The clause praises the individual’s career, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Martha is a trusted colleague, a devoted mother of Joe, Gio,” The clause offers personal description, unrelated to the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and Alexyss,” The clause lists family members, off the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and a tireless advocate for the people of the Big First District.” The clause praises an advocate, not the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “I thank Martha for her 25 years of faithful service to Kansans.” The clause thanks a staffer, not about the bill.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Our State is better because of her work and I am honored to have her on our team.” The clause praises the staffer’s contribution, not the bill.
Reasoning · no score
No score: nothing is concluded. Excluded from the average.
Reasoning checks for sound logic and solid support for any conclusion. A low score means the speaker made unsupported leaps or used weak arguments.
Conclusions found · 0
None: nothing is concluded.
Respect · no score
Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Clarity · 100
0 of 27 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Nothing lost points.
Claims · 5
This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.
1 “In July 2001, Martha began working for Senator Pat Roberts in his Dodge City office.” Martha Mendoza began working for Senator Pat Roberts in his Dodge City office in July 2001. search
2 “served as Senator Roberts’ district director for 8 years” Martha Mendoza served as Senator Pat Roberts’ district director for 8 years. search
3 “When I was elected to Congress in 2021” Tracey Mann was elected to Congress in 2021. search
4 “Martha still works in the same Dodge City office where she began her public service career 25 years ago.” Martha Mendoza currently works in the same Dodge City office where she began her public service career 25 years earlier. search
5 “Martha Mendoza for 25 years of dedicated service to the people of Kansas” Martha Mendoza has 25 years of service to the people of Kansas. search