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Mr. President, Claims · 332 wordsthe Book of Proverbs tells us that ``without a vision, people perish.’’1For SGT Leo Finn of Cullman, AL, he has had a clear vision for his life from day one.Leo feels he was ``born to serve in the military’’ and spent 36 years serving our country in the Army and Army National Guard.2Leo’s conviction to serve has been an asset to our country during some of the most troubling times, including the Vietnam war and War on Terror.Shortly after finishing college in Cullman, Leo enlisted in the Army.3He quickly deployed to Vietnam, 4where he spent the next 2 years in the fight against communism in Southeast Asia.5Upon returning home, he married his wife of 54 years, Sandra, 6and relocated back to Cullman where they have spent the last five decades working and raising their family.7Leo remained in the Army, eventually transitioning to the National Guard, 8while keeping up two to three other full-time jobs.9He deployed a second time in the early 2000s to Afghanistan, 10where he served as a platoon sergeant, sharing this same sense of purpose with those in his company.11From Alabama to Vietnam to Afghanistan, Leo has made the Yellowhammer State proud.Now, he stays involved in the Cullman community through his membership at the Sacred Heart Catholic Church and his local VFW Post.12Over the last few years, Leo has faced cancer head-on, 13but it hasn’t slowed him down or made him lose his vision.He faced his diagnosis with the same philosophy he faced our enemies abroad: with bravery and without fear.It is no wonder that his friend and colleague Joe Black speaks so highly of Leo after all he has endured, saying: ``His dedication, professionalism, 14and commitment to duty set an example for everyone who had the opportunity to serve alongside him.Leo Finn represents the very best of the Alabama National Guard and the generation of veterans whose sacrifices helped preserve the freedoms we enjoy today.’’Thanks · 33 wordsI am thankful for Leo’s calling to serve our State and country through all the challenges he has faced.It is my honor to recognize him as the July Veteran of the Month.Thanks