Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Charles E. Schumer

364 words · 20 sentences · 28 clauses

Statement grade
C+
Average 66 / 100
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Greeting 6%Anecdote 38%Claims 44%The ask 7%Positioning 5%

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Mr. President, Greeting · 21 wordsmy prayers and those of my family are with Senator Graham’s family, staff, and friends after his sudden, sudden passing yesterday.1Greeting Anecdote · 13 wordsWe see the white roses on his desk, and we think of Lindsey.Anecdote Claims · 75 wordsSenator Graham devoted much of his life to public service--first in the military and then in Congress, 2where he represented South Carolina for more than three decades.3 To the very end, Senator Graham’s life was defined by public service. He was an important Member of this institution and a crucial voice for his constituents in South Carolina. For all of our many and vehement disagreements, Senator Graham and I still found ways to work together. Anecdote · 101 wordsOne of the first things we did together was travel to China.4 We both believed that China was manipulating its currency, hurting American exports, hurting American jobs, and together we hammered away at that issue. At first, neither the left nor the right believed us. Amazingly enough, both the New York Times, a liberal publication, and the Wall Street Journal, a conservative publication, said there is no such thing as currency manipulation, but Graham and I proved to be correct, and we took some real efforts over the next few years to stop that manipulation and the outflow of American jobs.Anecdote Claims · 31 wordsWe worked together and hashed out a framework for commonsense, comprehensive immigration reform--the so-called Gang of Eight led by myself and Senator McCain and with Lindsey Graham as a key member.5 Anecdote · 25 wordsWe worked hard. We didn’t agree on everything in our bipartisan immigration proposal, but we agreed it was worth trying because doing nothing was worse.Anecdote Claims · 44 wordsWe also found common ground in our effort to aid Ukraine after the Russian invasion.6 I know that if Senator Graham were here in the Chamber today, he would also join me in urging the Senate to support Ukraine and strengthen sanctions on Russia.Unearned certainty The ask · 18 wordsI urge Senator Thune in honor of Lindsey to put the Russia sanctions bill on the floor immediately. Claims · 10 wordsIt will pass overwhelmingly and help our allies in Ukraine. Positioning · 19 wordsNot seeing eye to eye is no reason to be blind to the way forward. Lindsey could understand that.Positioning The ask · 7 wordsEvery Senator ought to do the same.

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