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John Thune

875 words · 39 sentences · 62 clauses

Statement grade
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55 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 3%Claims 29%Anecdote 24%Positioning 41%Thanks 3%

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Mr. President, Procedure · 10 wordsI come to the floor today with a heavy heart.Procedure Claims · 48 wordsI look to my right, and I see a desk which we in the Senate refer to and know as the John Calhoun desk.1 It is covered by a black shroud, and on top of that shroud is a bowl of white roses. That is Lindsey Graham’s desk.2 Anecdote · 89 wordsIt is difficult to believe that Lindsey Graham is no longer here with us, that we won’t run into him at a meeting today or share a joke with him at this afternoon’s vote. The halls of the Senate already feel empty without him, and I know I am not alone in that feeling. He was a friend to so many of us on both sides of the aisle. I know that I am not the only one who finds it difficult to imagine the Senate without Lindsey Graham.Anecdote Claims · 112 wordsThe events of Lindsey’s life have been well-documented over the past couple of days: his humble beginnings in South Carolina; 3sharing a single room with the rest of his family, behind his family’s bar; 4his guardianship of his younger sister Darline after the untimely death of their parents; 5his long service in the Air Force, the South Carolina Air National Guard, 6and the Air Force Reserve; his career in politics, first as a member of the South Carolina House of Representatives, then as a Member of the U.S. House of Representatives, 7where I served with him for 6 years, 8and then in the Senate, where he was just completing his fourth term.9 Positioning · 35 wordsIn the Senate, Lindsey distinguished himself as a staunch conservative--and a fierce advocate for South Carolina--but also as someone who was willing to work across the aisle to find common ground and to reach solutions.Positioning Claims · 64 wordsA lawyer by trade, he served as chairman of the Senate Judiciary Committee from 2019 to 2021, 10where he helped confirm a Supreme Court Justice and numerous Federal judges--the kind of judges who believe in following the law and the Constitution, instead of legislating policy from the bench.11 Most of all, of course, Lindsey was known for his national security and foreign policy work. Positioning · 49 wordsThere was no bigger believer in America’s role in the world. He was confident that the United States could be a force for good, and he gave everything he had to ensuring that we would be. He was a friend and defender of freedom-loving peoples all over the world.Positioning Claims · 29 wordsHe stood with the Ukrainian people in their fight against Russian aggression, and he died with his boots on, having just returned from a trip to Ukraine, his 10th.12 Positioning · 67 wordsHe believed fiercely in the importance of a strong national defense-- in ensuring that our country and our military men and women were always prepared to deter and defeat any threat. But while there was always a lot made of his support for American hard power, he was also a big believer in the use of soft power: economic, diplomatic, and political solutions to the world’s problems.Positioning Anecdote · 41 wordsI was fortunate to travel with him all over the world, including to Israel after Hamas’ October 7 attack.13 And I saw firsthand the work that he did to promote American security and the security of freedom-loving peoples around the globe.Anecdote Positioning · 154 wordsAnd, of course, I don’t need to tell anyone in this body that Lindsey was fearless in his commitment to the causes that he espoused. It didn’t matter to him whether he would catch flack on an issue. He was undaunted by the politics if he believed he was right on the principle. Senator, warrior, patriot, statesman--words that will be written about Lindsey. But for me, most of all, he was my friend. ``Without friends’’--Aristotle said--``no one would choose to live, [although] he had all other goods.’’14 And it is difficult to count the ways in which Lindsey’s friendship made this job richer and its burdens lighter. Lindsey was as loyal as they come and a trusted adviser. I could always rely on him for straight-talking advice. He never minced words or pulled punches. I could also rely on him for a steady flow of humor and encouragement. He always could make me laugh--always.Positioning Anecdote · 79 wordsIn the last couple of years, he came to South Dakota twice, 15and, twice, we sat on the deck and watched the sun go down on Lake Oahe--a familiar scene to me but new to him. And as the stars came out, you could see the Milky Way overhead, and you could hear coyotes howling and rooster pheasants cackling down below. Lindsey’s wit punctuated all of it, and I will cherish those memories for a long time to come.Anecdote Positioning · 28 wordsIf there is any light to be found in this grief, it is this: that as a Christian like Lindsey, I know that death is not the end.Positioning Procedure · 10 wordsThe Apostle Paul writes: Whereas another Graham once put it: ProcedureThanks · 30 wordsI will miss Lindsey’s friendship more than I can say. We pray for his staff and for his family, whom he loved dearly and who loved him dearly in return.Thanks Positioning · 26 wordsBut I am comforted by the knowledge that in the end, he has just changed his address and that one day we will laugh together again.Positioning Procedure · 4 wordsI yield the floor.Procedure

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