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Donald S. Beyer, Jr.

371 words · 18 sentences · 25 clauses

Statement grade
B
76 / 100, held down by Signal
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Greeting 2%Procedure 2%Claims 48%Anecdote 18%Positioning 27%Thanks 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 7 wordsI thank Congressman Walkinshaw for the time.Greeting Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 9 wordsI rise today in strong support of H.R. 6332.Procedure Claims · 39 wordsAs Mr. Walkinshaw has said, this legislation would name the post office at 10660 Page Avenue in Fairfax as the Gerald E.1 Connolly Post Office in honor of my dear friend and former colleague, the late Congressman Gerry Connolly. Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 40 wordsI used to tease Gerry all the time about the 41-mile Gerry Connolly Cross County Trail in Fairfax County that was a hiking, biking, 2and bridle trail. It went the whole arc, from one side of Fairfax County to another, AnecdotePositioning · 26 wordsbut it is difficult to imagine a more fitting tribute to Gerry’s lifetime of public service than this post office because of what he has done.Positioning Claims · 16 wordsHe wrote, sponsored, and passed the most important postal reform in this century, literally this millennium.3 Positioning · 12 wordsHe loved the Postal Service. He fought for it year after year.Positioning Claims · 24 wordsHe served on the House Committee on Oversight and Government Reform for 15 years and, again, was an immensely important leader on that committee.4 Positioning · 43 wordsHe fiercely believed in the Federal Government’s commitment to the American public for affordable and reliable mail delivery for every single household in our country, but he was also a steadfast champion for the unsung heroes, the postal workers, who made that possible.Positioning Claims · 38 wordsHe led the defense against the DOGE attacks on the Postal Service and efforts by this administration to privatize the Postal Service.5 As Gerry Connolly often reminded us, public service is leaving communities better than we found them, Positioning · 13 wordsand Northern Virginia is a better place for Gerry’s time in public service.Positioning Anecdote · 26 wordsI first met Gerry and Smitty when they came in as a young married couple 42 years ago when we volunteered on the same Governor’s campaign.6Anecdote Claims · 60 wordsOver the years, everything that could be done by any human being to make life better for the citizens of Northern Virginia, Gerry did--as a civic association leader, a supervisor, a chairman, a Congressman, the president of the NATO Parliamentary Assembly, 7and, most of all, as the Democratic chair of the Committee on Oversight and Government Reform--everything that he did.8 Thanks · 11 wordsLet me just say, Mr. Speaker, I will miss him greatly.Thanks Positioning · 7 wordsThis is a due and appropriate honor.Positioning

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