Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Donald G. Davis

151 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 79 / 100
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Procedure 10%Claims 60%Positioning 21%Thanks 9%

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Madam Speaker, Procedure · 15 wordsI rise with a heavy heart to honor Air Force Major Alexander Davis of Goldsboro.Procedure Claims · 90 wordsOn June 15, our Nation mourned when a tragic B-52 mishap at Edwards Air Force Base claimed the lives of eight brave airmen.1 Alex was among them, 2and his life was defined by selfless service. From earning the rank of Eagle Scout to his time at North Carolina State University and his distinguished military career, he faithfully answered every call to serve.3 Whether flying missions, modernizing our Air Force, or encouraging those around him, he was dependable. He dreamed of one day becoming an astronaut, always reaching for the skies. Positioning · 14 wordsEastern North Carolina will always be proud to call him one of our own.Positioning Thanks · 14 wordsTo Doug, Karen, and his family, we grieve with you. We pray with you.Thanks Positioning · 18 wordsWe will forever remember Major Alexander Davis, a beloved airman, a beloved leader, and a true American hero.Positioning

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