Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Kevin Kiley

221 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 81 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 10%Claims 65%Thanks 21%Procedure 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsI rise today to honor and celebrate the Sacramento Regional Builders Exchange for their 125 years of service to the Sacramento region.Greeting Claims · 143 wordsThe exchange is the development industry’s oldest and largest association in the Sacramento region, with over 1,100 member companies and 65,000 employees.12 Their members include area contractors and subcontractors, suppliers, and industry support organizations. They provide educational and safety programs along with networking opportunities. The founding of the exchange dates back to 1901, when a group of local builders formed an association for the purpose of resolving common issues and exchanging ideas related to their industry.3 Their objective was to encourage and cultivate a fellowship among its members and to make them better acquainted with the needs of the industry. The exchange is also a partner with the Construction Industry Education Foundation.5 The foundation serves more than 17,000 high school students annually.4 Their ``recruit and retain’’ partnership has also led to one of the fastest growing women in construction programs in the Nation. Thanks · 47 wordsOn behalf of the United States House of Representatives and California’s Third Congressional District, I am honored to celebrate the 125th anniversary of the Sacramento Regional Builders Exchange and to congratulate them for continuing to meet the area’s development needs as the Sacramento region continues to grow.Thanks Procedure · 9 wordsCommemorating 25th Anniversary of Asian Pacific American Public Affairs6Procedure

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