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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 17 wordswhen the stakes are highest, that is when upstate New Yorkers’ grit and toughness shows the most.PositioningClaims · 182 wordsJust look at our Averill Park Golden Knights, who brought home both the baseball and softball State championships this year.1The baseball team went into the championship game as underdogs, facing an undefeated opponent on a 28-game winning streak.2Coach George Brooks told his team to keep it simple, stay focused, stay disciplined, and that is what they did.Fred Bornn locked in and threw a complete game shutout, 3and Jeg Sansone drove in two runs to bring home the title.4Speaking of great coaching, Maria Roberts led the Averill Park softball team to the championship in her very first year on the job.5The Golden Knights built an early lead off Emily Aiossa’s three-run homer, 6but the game was on the line in the top of the 6th, with the bases loaded, nobody out, and the opponent’s top-of-the-order coming up to bat.Pitcher Abigail Colwill and the Golden Knights defense did what upstate New Yorkers do under pressure: They dug in and got to work.They retired three straight, the last of which was an amazing catch by centerfielder Mady Charron.7Greeting · 13 wordsCongratulations to the Averill Park Golden Knights.We are so proud of them.GreetingPromise · 103 wordsI am honored to enter their full roster into the Congressional Record.Ethan Archambeault Roman Badia Griffin Baker Nicholas Bendetti Joseph Biette Frederick Bornn Kevin Daley Luke Davidson Anthony Decker Austin Fabiano Shea Gibson August Hencke Jr Gavin Herald Brady Heritage Maximus Impellizzeri Braeden Kilgallon Max Kilgallon David Lang Steven Matheke Bryce Rokjer Dylan Rouleau Jeg Sansone Mason Sansone Devin Slmiele Kody Thompson Emily Aiossa Isabella Alvarez Madison Bayer Lily Biette Kaleina Bowen Madelyn Charron Abigail Colwill Audrey Coon Anna Cronin Anna Fedorowicz Alexis Gibson Elizabeth Lindow Natalia Mancino Quinn O’Brien Dianna Parker Julia Ratigan Lila Ratigan Victoria Sanchez Piper Tobey Sage Yakuboski