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Ayanna Pressley

230 words · 12 sentences · 20 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
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Claims 72%Positioning 15%Promise 7%The ask 3%Thanks 2%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 117 wordsI rise for the family and loved ones of Pierre Damas Bel, a beloved son and brother, 20-year-old college student, and Haitian immigrant with temporary protected status.1 He found joy on the soccer field and dreamed of studying medicine until the Trump administration forced an ankle monitor, really a shackle, on him and threatened his deportation.23 Trump’s termination of Haiti TPS robbed this young man of his humanity, stripped him of his dignity, 4and inflicted mental trauma that became too much for him to bear. He simply could not go on. Trump’s cruel attacks on our Haitian neighbors certainly will take a toll on our economy and our national security but also a psychological and emotional toll. Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordsno parent should lose their child, no sibling their older brother, PositioningClaims · 28 wordsyet Trump is traumatizing communities in every corner of our country. Pierre should be alive today, falling in love, playing soccer, and on path to becoming a doctor. Promise · 17 wordsWe honor his memory by doing everything we can to save lives and extend TPS for Haiti.Vague promise Claims · 11 wordsThe House has already passed our legislation to do just that, 5The ask · 8 wordsand the Senate must follow suit without delay. Claims · 10 wordsPierre’s father’s last words to him were: ``Pierre, come home.’’ Positioning · 24 wordsBecause of the cruelty, anti-Blackness, and anti-immigrant policies of this administration, which I consider to be un-American, sadly, Pierre never will make it home.Positioning Thanks · 4 wordsRest in eternal peace.Thanks

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