Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Sanford D. Bishop, Jr.

266 words · 13 sentences · 23 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 72 / 100
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Claims 47%Positioning 14%Anecdote 20%Thanks 13%Procedure 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 67 words2 days ago, Georgia lost a true public servant and leader.1 Former Congressman Charles Hatcher was born in Georgia, served our country in the United States Air Force, earned his law degree, 2and returned to Southwest Georgia to practice his profession. He served in the Georgia House of Representatives from 1973 to 1980 and subsequently in the U.S. House of Representatives, this House, from 1981 to 1992.3 Positioning · 20 wordsHe loved rural, Southwest Georgia. During his years of public service, he was a champion for agriculture and rural development.Positioning Anecdote · 53 wordsWhile we competed in the 1992 Democratic primary for Georgia’s Second Congressional District, 4which I won, I was glad to have his support and counsel, nonetheless, 5as I started my tenure on Capitol Hill. He and his wife, the Honorable Krysta Hardin, became friends of longstanding, and I will always cherish that friendship.Anecdote Claims · 58 wordsHe continued to serve Americans as a Presidential appointee in the U.S. Department of Agriculture during both Clinton administrations, 6and he continued to serve the Virginia community in which he resided thereafter, volunteering his time with a number of local charities, including Meals on Wheels, and through his local church, the Washington Street United Methodist Church in Alexandria.7 Positioning · 18 wordsHe leaves behind a legacy of love and compassion through his work and the relationships that he built.Positioning Thanks · 35 wordsI extend my heartfelt condolences to his wife, Krysta; his children; his grandchildren; and loving family; as well as all of those whose lives he touched and helped make better. I will miss him dearly.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 15 wordsI now yield to the gentleman from Georgia (Mr. Austin Scott), my colleague and friend.Procedure

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