A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 34%Anecdote 29%Positioning 29%Promise 9%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 13 words25 years ago, ordinary people kissed their families good-bye and went to work.1Anecdote · 60 wordsAs I went to work after making my children’s lunch, I heard on the radio that a plane had flown into Tower One and thought it was a prank.By the time we turned on the TV in our waiting room, we saw the second plane hit the tower and knew we had a terrorist attack, our generation’s Pearl Harbor.2AnecdoteClaims · 78 wordsAmong them were a father who called his wife just to say ``I love you’’ one more time; a mother who tucked a photo of her kids into her bag that morning; an Iowan who was in his second week at Columbia, who goes down to volunteer and then enlists in the military; firefighters who ran upstairs while everyone else was running down because that was simply who they were.Nearly 3,000 of them never made it home.3Positioning · 38 wordsIn the quiet that followed, in the ash, in the silence, something happened that I still carry with me.Strangers became family.We held each other.We cried together.For a moment, we forgot everything that divided us.PositioningAnecdote · 17 wordsI enlisted in the Army to ensure rights for everyone, regardless of whether they disagree with me.AnecdotePositioning · 40 wordsNow, 25 years later, I still think about the families who set an extra place at the table that will always be empty, the children who grew up without a parent.Their grief became our grief, and it still is.PositioningPromise · 23 wordsWe promise to never forget.Vague promiseI will never forget them.I will always defend them.Those who harm us, we will not forget.