Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Jill N. Tokuda

144 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 88 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 49%Reasoning 21%Positioning 18%The ask 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 13 words3 years after the Lahaina wildfires, survivors are rebuilding and finally returning home.1 Reasoning · 20 wordsThey should be welcomed back and not told that the basic services they had before the fire are now gone. Claims · 21 wordsYet, the United States Postal Service is denying street delivery to rebuilt homes and forcing residents to use cluster mailboxes instead.2 Positioning · 26 wordsThat is a slap in the face. A cluster mailbox is not a welcome mat for families who fought to come home. It is an insult.Positioning Claims · 31 wordsNow, adding insult to injury, the U.S. Postal Service is considering permanently closing the downtown Lahaina post office damaged in the fires, with little notice and virtually no meaningful community input.3 The ask · 17 wordsThe United States Postal Service needs to restore home delivery, stop the closure, and listen to Lahaina.Vague promise Claims · 6 wordsOur community has already lost enough. Reasoning · 10 wordsRecovery means restoring what was lost, not taking more away.

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