A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
The ask 4%Claims 69%Anecdote 16%Positioning 10%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, The ask · 4 wordsfree Sama Safi now.Claims · 63 wordsSama Safi is a 20-year-old U.S. citizen and honors student of psychology who was kidnapped from her home in the middle of the night by the Israeli forces.1For exactly 3 months today, Sama has been suffering in the Israeli military prisons.2Sama has a severe chronic medical condition that requires daily medication.Her doctors say that she could have irreversible organ damage.3Mr. Speaker, Claims · 24 words40 of my colleagues and I, along with 6 Senators, sent a letter to Secretary Rubio demanding him to work on her release immediately.4Anecdote · 30 wordsI have actually spoken directly to Sama’s parents, who are terrified for their daughter.They tell me that they wake up every morning hoping to hear Sama playing her music.AnecdoteClaims · 40 wordsThey told me that Ben-Gvir, Israel’s Minister of National Security, went to the women’s prison where Sama is being held, 5and he taunted the prisoners and assaulted detainees.6He mocked the inhumane conditions, saying that it is what they deserve.7Positioning · 19 wordsSama doesn’t deserve this.No one does.She deserves to be home with her family, studying for her classes.PositioningThe ask · 3 wordsFree Sama now.