Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Luz M. Rivas

176 words · 11 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 72 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 36%Claims 35%Reasoning 11%The ask 6%Positioning 11%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 20 wordsduring the August work period, I visited the Dilley family immigration detention center with my colleagues to see conditions firsthand.1Anecdote Claims · 22 wordsOver 500 people are being detained in inhumane conditions, including pregnant women, children, infants, 23and babies who are just 2 months old.4 Reasoning · 20 wordsThese individuals should be living their lives, getting ready for school, and raising their families. Children should not be detained. The ask · 10 wordsDilley must be shut down, and ICE must be abolished.No reason given Positioning · 20 wordsWhile Republicans continue to let ICE run out of control, working families are struggling to afford basic essentials like groceries.Positioning Anecdote · 44 wordsI visited the North Valley Caring Services in North Hills to see the work that the L.A.5 Regional Food Bank does to help families who are struggling with food insecurity.6 I spoke with healthcare workers about the importance of protecting Medicare for our constituents.7Anecdote Claims · 40 wordsI visited a Head Start program to learn about how Republicans’ cuts make it harder for working families to thrive.8 What I heard from my constituents at all of these visits is that they need relief from Republicans’ affordability crisis.

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