Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Steve Cohen

157 words · 12 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Signal
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Claims 20%Aside 6%Positioning 37%Anecdote 36%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 14 wordsthis is my first opportunity to serve as the dean of the Tennessee delegation, Aside · 10 wordsand it didn’t come too soon. Time is running out.Aside Positioning · 24 wordsDolly Parton was a phenomenal Tennessean, probably the best representative we ever had. She never looked down on anybody. She had a big heart.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsWhenever there was a tragedy or somebody in need, she came forward and wanted it to be anonymous. Positioning · 12 wordsShe was a good human being, and she had a beautiful voice.Positioning Anecdote · 57 wordsI had a friend who was involved in the music business in the early seventies in Laurel Canyon when the Eagles and others were getting together. He told me about Dolly being out there, and that is where she got to know Linda Ronstadt and others.1 He said she had such a beautiful voice, and she did.Anecdote Positioning · 22 wordsShe will be remembered forever for all she did for humanity. Tennessee is proud to have her and will always love her.Positioning

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