Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Diana Harshbarger

198 words · 15 sentences · 19 clauses

Statement grade
C+
Average 66 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 9%Claims 38%Positioning 34%Thanks 6%Promise 8%Procedure 6%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 17 wordsI rise today to honor a true daughter of Tennessee, Dolly Parton--a woman who needs no introduction.Greeting Claims · 19 wordsDolly was a native of my district in East Tennessee, and she was from Locust Ridge in Sevier County.1 Positioning · 43 wordsShe never forgot where she came from. Her music told the truth about hard work, faith, and family, and that truth is why the whole world fell in love with Dolly. But it was her heart that made her a legend back home.Positioning Claims · 56 wordsShe rebuilt the community after the wildfires in 2016 that tore through Sevier County.2 She opened doors for children to learn to read through her Imagination Library.3 She supported healthcare and research for Tennessee families. She protected the mountains that she loved. Most people will know her theme park that is in the district called Dollywood.4 Positioning · 25 wordsShe was guided by her faith and her East Tennessee upbringing, and Dolly used her success to lift people up around her at every turn.Positioning Thanks · 11 wordsMy prayers are with her family and everyone who loved her.Thanks Promise · 16 wordsThe Tennessee delegation is committed to ensuring that her legacy is remembered for generations to come.Vague promise Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsI yield to the gentleman from Tennessee (Mr. Cohen), my colleague.Procedure

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