Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Mark DeSaulnier

157 words · 6 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
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Greeting 17%Claims 59%Positioning 8%The ask 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 27 wordsI rise today to recognize a friend and a local hero in the San Francisco Bay Area, Dr. Kent Lee Sack, who sadly passed away in June.1Greeting Claims · 93 wordsDr. Sack, after completing a family medicine residency at the Contra Costa Regional Medical Center, was drafted into the Navy after his residency, 23where he served as a Marine Corps surgeon in combat in Vietnam.4 Returning to the bay area after his military service, Kent became an early provider of HIV care during the AIDS epidemic and established social services for patients, deeply connected to his patients.5 Kent’s commitment to social justice led him to leadership roles in the Bay Area Physicians for Human Rights and the Rainbow Community Center in Concord, California.6 Positioning · 12 wordsKent will be remembered for his compassion and his commitment to equality.Positioning The ask · 25 wordsPlease join me in honoring this great American and a dear friend, Dr. Sack, for his life of service to our community and our country.

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