A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 7%Anecdote 23%Claims 53%Thanks 17%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordsI rise today to honor the life and legacy of Barbara Matteson of Tucson, Arizona.GreetingAnecdote · 21 wordsI can’t think of a major education event, rally, or protest in Tucson where I didn’t see Barbara front and center.AnecdoteClaims · 44 wordsA lifelong educator, the first in her family to go to college, Barbara spent over 38 years as a classroom teacher in the Tucson Unified School Direct.1As mentioned in her obituary, her ability to make learning fun and meaningful left a lasting impact.2Anecdote · 27 wordsBeing out and about in Tucson with Barbara inevitably meant being stopped by a former student who would share their stories of how she influenced their lives.AnecdoteClaims · 66 wordsAs a union organizer and fierce advocate for public education, Barbara dedicated herself to fighting for our students, our teachers, and our schools.She showed up, She spoke up, and she never stopped standing up for what she believed was right.Barbara was not only a champion for education, she was a friend and someone who made our community stronger through her service and her commitment.Thanks · 25 wordsTo Barbara, I thank her for always fighting for our students, teachers, and schools.To Barbara’s family, I thank them for sharing her with us.ThanksMr. Speaker, Thanks · 11 wordsmay my friend rest in peace.I will always remember her.Thanks