Analysis · Floor speech · beta

James Gallagher

231 words · 16 sentences · 22 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
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Claims 49%Thanks 12%Anecdote 19%Positioning 12%The ask 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 26 wordstoday, I rise to honor the life of Rylee Rose Belza, a beloved 11-year-old from Marysville who entered into eternity with her Savior on July 8.1 Thanks · 27 wordsRylee was the cherished daughter of Dom and Julia Belza and a loving sister whose joy filled her family’s life. Our hearts are with Dom and Julia.Thanks Anecdote · 21 wordsI have seen the deep faith, amazing grace, and love that has been guiding the Belza family during this painful time.Anecdote Claims · 27 wordsRylee was a bright light. She loved her family, her friends, softball, and fishing. Her church and her faith in the Lord were central to her life. Anecdote · 23 wordsThe picture that really stuck with me at her memorial was Rylee worshiping with arms stretched wide even as she was battling cancer.Anecdote Claims · 41 wordsShe carried joy into every room and made people laugh. She consistently placed herself behind others. She had a beautiful voice, and she loved to sing ``The Star-Spangled Banner.’’ She wanted to be the President. She told her classmates as much, 2Positioning · 10 wordsand, Mr. Speaker, I bet you she would have been.Positioning Claims · 14 wordsThe Yuba-Sutter community has responded with compassion, love, and prayer for the Belza family. The ask · 19 wordsToday, I ask the House to join me in praying for Rylee’s family and every person her life touched. Claims · 6 wordsRylee’s life was far too short, Positioning · 17 wordsbut her outsized legacy will remain with her family and her community for many years to come.Positioning

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