Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Jill N. Tokuda

282 words · 17 sentences · 25 clauses

Statement grade
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Average 89 / 100
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Claims 72%Reasoning 11%Promise 9%Positioning 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 177 wordsafter the Lahaina wildfire, West Maui knew we could not afford to wait to strengthen fire protection and emergency response, 1so the community got to work. They donated land and raised $3 million to build a new fire station in Olowalu.2 This station will cut emergency response times by up to 15 minutes. That can mean the difference between life and death, between a home burning and a home being saved. It will also cut fire insurance costs by nearly half for homeowners, saving families thousands of dollars annually. The land was donated. The money was raised. The project was fully funded.3 Then President Trump’s steel tariff slapped over $300,000 to the cost, not because the project changed, not because it went over budget, 4but because the President changed our trade policy. This is what reckless tariffs look like in real life.Logical leap Today, it is a fire station on Maui, but across our country, families, businesses, and communities are paying more because of the President’s tariffs, including for the things that they need to keep themselves safe. Reasoning · 14 wordsA fire station is not a luxury, not in West Maui, not after Lahaina. Promise · 26 wordsI am fighting to get relief for Olowalu, Vague promisebut we cannot fight these tariffs one fire station, one small business, or one community at a time. Reasoning · 18 wordsCongress has the constitutional authority over tariffs and trade, 5and it is time we take that responsibility back.Vague promise Claims · 27 wordsNo President should be able to unilaterally impose tariffs that make it harder and more expensive for Americans to protect their homes, their communities, and their lives. Positioning · 20 wordsWest Maui has already paid too high a price. We should be making communities safer, not making safety more expensive.Positioning

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