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Statement grade
The average of Signal and Clarity is 62. The grade is held to 54, 30 above Signal. 54 / 100, held down by Signal
Signal
24 / 100
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Relevance
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Reasoning
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Respect
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Clarity
100 / 100
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 13% Claims 25% Anecdote 37% Positioning 12% Thanks 12%
Structure · 11 steps
Claims · 5
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 31 words I rise today to honor a great patriot, a friend, and a giant of American diplomacy, Ambassador Tim Carney, who passed away earlier this month after a long fight with cancer.1 Greeting Claims · 18 words Ambassador Carney was the 14th United States Ambassador to Sudan and the 45th United States Ambassador to Haiti.2 Anecdote · 29 words I got to know Ambassador Carney during my year at the U.S. Embassy in Baghdad during the Iraq surge where we worked closely together on issues related to Baghdad.3 Anecdote Positioning · 29 words Ambassador Carney is one of those Americans that you read about in storybooks: an adventurer, a scholar, and indeed, truly a diplomat. His wife, Vicki Butler, is equally amazing.4 Positioning Claims · 7 words Vicki came from a prominent Spokane family. Anecdote · 28 words They met in Southeast Asia and had a patriotic romance that spanned the globe and made a lasting impact on Washington State and the United States of America. Anecdote Claims · 36 words When Tim finished his diplomatic career, he came back to Spokane with Vicki and served as a very important director of our museum of arts and culture, helping bridge a challenging period in that institution’s time.5 Thanks · 4 words I remember Tim fondly. Thanks Anecdote · 32 words Here in this photo you can see Tim and Vicki with me and my wife, Eleanor, and I look to them as an inspiration in my own romance with my wonderful wife. Anecdote Thanks · 26 words Tim, you will not be forgotten. Vicki, you are loved, and we thank both of you for your tremendous impact on these United States of America. Thanks
At a glance
Lost points for Anecdote ×4 Positioning ×4 Thanks ×4 Greeting ×2 Little substance Much of this statement went to praise, blame, greetings, routine procedure or general stories rather than reasons, requests or specific points.
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Signal · 24
14 of 14 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Greeting Greetings and pleasantries. What the tags mean → “I rise today to honor a great patriot, a friend,” A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
Greeting Greetings and pleasantries. What the tags mean → “and a giant of American diplomacy, Ambassador Tim Carney, who passed away earlier this month after a long fight with cancer.” A greeting: no claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “I got to know Ambassador Carney during my year at the U.S. Embassy in Baghdad during the Iraq surge where we worked closely together on issues related to Baghdad.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Ambassador Carney is one of those Americans that you read about in storybooks:” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “an adventurer, a scholar,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and indeed, truly a diplomat.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “His wife, Vicki Butler, is equally amazing.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “They met in Southeast Asia and had a patriotic romance that spanned the globe and made a lasting impact on Washington State and the United States of America.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “I remember Tim fondly.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “Here in this photo you can see Tim and Vicki with me and my wife, Eleanor,” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “and I look to them as an inspiration in my own romance with my wonderful wife.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Tim, you will not be forgotten.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “Vicki, you are loved,” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Thanks Thanks and tributes. What the tags mean → “and we thank both of you for your tremendous impact on these United States of America.” Thanks: no claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · no score
Not applicable: nothing to answer. Excluded from the average.
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue.
Reasoning · no score
No score: nothing is concluded. Excluded from the average.
Reasoning checks for sound logic and solid support for any conclusion. A low score means the speaker made unsupported leaps or used weak arguments.
Conclusions found · 0
None: nothing is concluded.
Respect · no score
Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Clarity · 100
0 of 14 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Nothing lost points.
Claims · 5
This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.
1 “passed away earlier this month after a long fight with cancer” search 2 “the 14th United States Ambassador to Sudan and the 45th United States Ambassador to Haiti” search 3 “my year at the U.S. Embassy in Baghdad during the Iraq surge” search 4 “His wife, Vicki Butler” search 5 “served as a very important director of our museum of arts and culture” search
