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Analilia Mejia

205 words · 9 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
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Greeting 30%Claims 62%Thanks 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 37 wordsI rise today to recognize and congratulate Major General Christopher D. Schneider for his new role as the commanding general of Picatinny Arsenal in addition to serving as the portfolio acquisition executive for agile sustainment and ammunition.12Greeting Claims · 128 wordsGeneral Schneider brings to this role more than three decades of distinguished service to our Nation.3 A graduate of the United States Military Academy, he began his career as an infantry officer, serving with the 1st Infantry Division, the 18th Airborne Corps, 45and the 82nd Airborne Division.6 Also, he served with the 75th Ranger Regiment, with deployments to Bosnia-Herzegovina, Iraq, 7and Afghanistan.8 He later transitioned to the Army Acquisition Corps, 9where he held senior leadership positions focused on strengthening our Nation’s military capabilities and advancing critical technologies. As commanding general of Picatinny Arsenal, General Schneider takes on an important responsibility for the U.S. Army and will be supported by one of the most talented and hardworking workforces in the Army right here in New Jersey’s 11th Congressional District. Greeting · 25 wordsI congratulate General Schneider on his new role and look forward to working with him to support Picatinny Arsenal, its workforce, and our national security.Greeting Thanks · 15 wordsI welcome General Schneider to Picatinny and thank him for his service to our country.Thanks

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