Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Analilia Mejia

121 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 78 / 100
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Greeting 23%Claims 56%Positioning 14%Thanks 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 28 wordsI rise today to recognize the leadership of Niheema Malloy, the first woman and the first Black woman to serve as chief of police in Maplewood, New Jersey.1Greeting Claims · 68 wordsChief Malloy was appointed to this position with over 25 years of law enforcement experience.2 Under her leadership, Maplewood would have a department built on community partnership, officers trained in de- escalation, in crisis response, and in listening before a crisis ever happens. Chief Malloy is committed to putting Maplewood first by ensuring that community safety and protection go hand in hand with the well-being of our residents. Positioning · 17 wordsNew Jersey is proud of Chief Niheema Malloy. Her leadership reflects the very best of our communities, PositioningThanks · 8 wordsand I thank her for her remarkable service.Thanks

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