Analysis · Floor speech · beta

James Gallagher

222 words · 13 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
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Thanks 14%Anecdote 13%Claims 59%Positioning 9%The ask 5%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 31 wordsI rise today to recognize the Community Housing Improvement Program, or CHIP for short, a nonprofit that is helping working families achieve the American Dream of homeownership across the north State.Thanks Anecdote · 28 wordsI recently visited the community of Orland Park Estates housing project in Glenn County, where eight families received keys to homes they helped build with their own hands.1Anecdote Claims · 6 wordsThese families put in the work. Positioning · 6 wordsSacramento should try doing the same.Positioning Claims · 115 wordsInstead, Governor Gavin Newsom and Democratic politicians have passed costly mandates and excessive fees that keep driving up the price of building a home. It is now a median price of $900,000.2 California has an affordability crisis because Sacramento keeps making everything less affordable.Logical leap As a member of the Congressional Real Estate Caucus and a member of the majority, I have been able to support the More Homes on the Market Act, the 21st Century ROAD to Housing Act, 3and the Uplifting First-Time Homebuyers Act. Together, these bills tackle the housing crisis and make homeownership more affordable for working families, just like those eight families in Orland who now have keys to a new home. Positioning · 13 wordsCHIP proves that the American Dream is still alive in the north State.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 11 wordsThese families worked hard for their homes. They earned their keys. The ask · 12 wordsThe least Sacramento can do is stop making those dreams more expensive.

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