Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Jimmy Gomez

100 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
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Claims 63%Promise 5%Positioning 32%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 17 wordsfor far too many Angelenos, a bus ride to work, school, or home takes far too long. Promise · 5 wordsToday, we are changing that. Claims · 46 wordsI am proud to announce $149 million in new Federal funding for L.A.’s busiest bus corridor, through the Vermont Avenue Bus Rapid Transit project.12 This investment will serve over 20 million riders a year, cut travel time by 24 percent, 34and create thousands of good-paying jobs.Vague promise Positioning · 32 wordsAngelenos deserve transit that gets them where they need to go, faster, safer, and on time. This investment is a major step forward to a more connected, affordable, and livable Los Angeles.Positioning

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