Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Claudia Tenney

200 words · 12 sentences · 21 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 83 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 11%Claims 60%Thanks 21%Reasoning 8%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 22 wordsI rise today in loving memory of Donna Besler-Tatem of Canandaigua, New York, a woman defined by faith, family, compassion, and service.Greeting Claims · 33 wordsShe led the Care Net Pregnancy Center of Canandaigua, helped to establish a Nowhere to Go program for people experiencing homelessness, supported suicide prevention efforts, 12and counseled individuals in the Ontario County Jail.3 Thanks · 31 wordsDonna lived with deep faith, love for her family, and compassion for others. She was always warm and welcoming, with a special gift of making people feel seen, heard, and valued.Thanks Claims · 74 wordsAfter losing her beloved son Brennan to suicide, Donna transformed her grief into a mission of hope and compassion.4 Family was precious to Donna. She was the loving mother of Ashley, Grant, Luke, and the late Brennan. She cherished her father; her sisters, including Diana, her sister and best friend; and her precious therapy dog, Piper. In recent years, Donna devoted herself to caring for her beloved mother, who passed away just months ago.5 Reasoning · 16 wordsDonna’s life reminds us to be kinder, listen longer, judge less, and see the person first. Claims · 13 wordsOur Finger Lakes community is better because Donna was a part of it. Thanks · 11 wordsMay God bless Donna, her family, and all who loved her.Thanks

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