Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Young Kim

189 words · 11 sentences · 18 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 89 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Anecdote 22%Reasoning 7%Claims 40%Positioning 11%The ask 20%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 42 wordsI grew up in the shadow of war in South Korea. My family fled poverty and a bitter lack of opportunity, and my mother- in-law crossed the DMZ multiple times to rescue loved ones who were trapped under tyranny in North Korea.1Anecdote Reasoning · 14 wordsFor me, it is unimaginable to see socialist ideas gaining traction in America today, Claims · 59 wordsbut then I remember that socialism never advertises its track record: starvation, oppression, the loss of freedom and opportunity, and more than 100 million lives lost worldwide.2 Today’s proponents of socialism have made their goals clear. Read them for yourself on the DSA website: abolish the U.S. Senate, replace the Presidency, dismantle the Supreme Court, 3and rewrite our Constitution. Positioning · 21 wordsThese radicals want to tear down everything America stands on and everything it stands for. I refuse to watch that happen.Positioning Mr. Speaker, The ask · 37 wordsI urge my colleagues to support H. Res. 1490 so that this generation of Americans is not fooled by the empty promises of socialism and future generations never pay the price that families like mine already have. Claims · 16 wordsAs Ronald Reagan said: We must preserve America as the world’s last best hope for mankind.4

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