Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Donald S. Beyer, Jr.

377 words · 21 sentences · 26 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 76 / 100
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Procedure 2%Claims 50%Positioning 22%Reasoning 8%Promise 12%The ask 7%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 7 wordsI rise in opposition to this bill.Procedure Claims · 56 wordsWe must protect the North Atlantic right whale, which, as you heard, is already at risk of extinction. This bill threatens to put them right over the edge. With only 70 reproductively active females left, the North Atlantic right whale can’t afford to wait another 7 years for protection.1 They realistically could be extinct right now. Positioning · 6 wordsWe can and must act now.PositioningVague promise Claims · 81 wordsEntanglement in fishing gear is a leading cause, maybe the leading cause, of North Atlantic right whale deaths. In 2023, a provision delayed critical protections intended to reduce these deadly entanglements.2 As a result, the earliest measures to protect these North American right whales could be implemented in 2029.3 That is 3 years from now. This bill would further delay the implementation until 2035.4 That is a 13-year waiver from the Endangered Species Act and the Marine Mammal Protection Act requirements.5 Positioning · 11 wordsI am wondering why 6 years has not already been enough.Positioning Reasoning · 31 wordsDelaying these protections doesn’t ultimately serve the fishing industry’s best interests. It will only delay changes that the industry ultimately needs to make any way, leaving them less time to adapt. Positioning · 22 wordsIf they haven’t done it in the last 6 years, why do we think they will do it in the next 13?Positioning Promise · 20 wordsNow is the time we should be working with them and in partnership with the industry to effectively support them.Vague promise Mr. Speaker, Claims · 50 wordsI don’t minimize that the lobster industry is facing uncertainty and economic hardship, but that is a roller coaster of tariff implementations and rollbacks, rising inflation increasing the cost of fuel and bait, and warming waters that reduce larval lobster survival and encourage survivors to migrate northwards to Canadian waters.6Off point Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 44 wordsif my colleagues across the aisle truly care about protecting lobstermen and fishermen, they would join me in opposing Trump’s tariffs, his antagonism of our Canadian neighbors, his war of choice in Iran, his degradation of our environment, and his denial of climate change.PositioningOff point Promise · 24 wordsWe could do better by our lobstermen by working with them to ensure they have the support they need without sacrificing an entire species.Vague promise Mr. Speaker, The ask · 25 wordsI hope all my colleagues will join me in opposing this bill and instead work on a solution that would be a win-win for everybody.Vague promise

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