Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Glenn Thompson

146 words · 9 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
C+
68 / 100, held down by Signal
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Claims 39%Positioning 42%Anecdote 18%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 14 wordstoday I highlight Penn State University, which delivered its 1-millionth degree earlier this summer.1 Positioning · 13 wordsThis historic milestone reflects the university’s commitment to excellent innovation and student success.Positioning Claims · 24 wordsSince the university’s founding more than 170 years ago, graduates have become leaders in their communities.2 Penn State alumni are dedicated to serving others. Positioning · 35 wordsThe 1 million degrees is more than just a statistic. This is an achievement that reflects 1 million dreams of attending university, 1 million new opportunities, and 1 million graduates who have impacted the world.Positioning Anecdote · 27 wordsAs a graduate of Penn State, I am proud to be a part of the 1 million students who have earned a degree from this remarkable institution.Anecdote Claims · 19 wordsPenn State, the Commonwealth’s only land-grant university, has its eyes on the next goal.3 Students are always pushing boundaries, Positioning · 14 wordsand I am excited to see the next milestone that this great university reaches.Positioning

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