Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Earl L. "Buddy" Carter

157 words · 10 sentences · 16 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 19%Claims 48%Positioning 33%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 30 wordsI rise today to honor the life of Michael Mann, a devoted husband, father, and servant leader who passed away on July 28 after a courageous 2-year battle with cancer.1Greeting Claims · 27 wordsMichael dedicated more than 16 years to Chick-fil-A of Athens.2 He began as a team member in 2010 and most recently led as the director of development.3 Positioning · 32 wordsHe led with humility. He served without hesitation, and he believed leadership meant putting others first. He challenged people to grow. He celebrated their successes, and never stopped encouraging those around him.Positioning Claims · 11 wordsMichael served faithfully as an elder at Cleveland Road Baptist Church, 4Positioning · 20 wordsas his greatest desire was to be with Christ, sharing his love for Him with his church family and community.Positioning Claims · 37 wordsHe is survived by his wife of nearly 10 years, Stephanie, 5and their two sons, Estiven and Thomas.6 Michael’s legacy lives on through his family, his church, his Chick- fil-A family, and his vast community of friends.

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