Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Adelita S. Grijalva

203 words · 8 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
C+
Average 67 / 100
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Claims 51%Positioning 29%Reasoning 7%Procedure 4%The ask 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 42 wordsI rise today to remember the victims of a shooting that occurred outside of the Venture-N bar in Tucson, Arizona, last night--Vincent Siqueiros and Cameron Capara--and to demand that this Chamber take immediate action to ensure that this can never happen again.1Vague promise Positioning · 20 wordsI am disgusted by the targeted act of hate and the cold-blooded murder of two members of our LGBTQIA+ community.Positioning Claims · 23 wordsThis horrific attack is a painful reminder that even in welcoming communities like Tucson, hate and violence against our LGBTQIA+ community still exists. Reasoning · 15 wordsWhen the hate is combined with easy access to firearms, the consequences can be deadly. Claims · 29 wordsI am sick and tired of Congress refusing to lift a finger to protect our communities while every day dozens of people are shot and killed across this country.2 Procedure · 8 wordsIt does not have to be this way.Procedure Claims · 10 wordsThe House of Representatives is returning to session this week, 3The ask · 17 wordsand our first action should be passing commonsense gun safety reforms that we know can save lives.Logical leapUnearned certainty Positioning · 39 wordsIn Tucson, we must come together as one city, mourn alongside victims and families and friends, and stand with our LGBTQIA+ community, saying in the most unconditional terms: Everyone is welcome in Tucson, and hate has no place here.Positioning

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