Analysis · Floor speech · beta

John Joyce

126 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Statement grade
B–
Average 74 / 100
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Greeting 21%Claims 49%Thanks 30%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 26 wordsit is with deep appreciation that I rise to recognize William Swartzwelder of Breezewood for an extraordinary record of public service that spans over seven decades.Greeting Claims · 62 wordsAs a volunteer firefighter, Bill followed the example of his parents and joined the Breezewood Volunteer Fire Company in 1956.1 He has filled a variety of leadership roles over the years. A regular participant in Monday night work sessions, fundraising activities, and other fire company-related functions, Bill, actually to this date, continues to attend monthly meetings, where he serves on various committees. Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 38 wordson behalf of the constituents throughout Bedford County and the entire 13th Congressional District, I personally thank Bill for his outstanding commitment to the Breezewood Volunteer Fire Company and congratulate him on this remarkable milestone of public service.Thanks

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