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John Joyce

144 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

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B
Average 78 / 100
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Thanks 44%Claims 56%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 31 wordstoday I rise to recognize high school students Jesi Jetnarayan and Will Davis of Franklin County for achieving a special distinction during their successful trek to the summit of Mount Kilimanjaro.1Thanks Claims · 81 wordsBy reaching the over 19,000-foot summit of Mount Kilimanjaro on August 1, Jesi and Will are believed to be the youngest high school students in the history of Franklin County to achieve this remarkable feat.23 Both seniors this year at Shalom Christian Academy, this achievement is a testament to Jesi and Will’s spirit of adventure, personal endurance, 4and will to succeed. The team of hikers that accompanied Jesi and Will on their climb were their fathers, Vishal Jetnarayan and Ben Davis.5 Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 32 wordson behalf of the constituents throughout Franklin County and the entire 13th Congressional District, I congratulate Jesi and Will on this outstanding achievement and express best wishes as they climb future mountains.Thanks

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