A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 30%Claims 47%Thanks 23%
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Mr. President, Greeting · 36 wordstoday I recognize Tyler Groen, an intern in my Washington, DC, office, for all of the hard work he has done for me, my staff, 1and the State of South Dakota over the past several weeks.GreetingClaims · 57 wordsTyler is a graduate of Brandon Valley High School in Brandon, SD, 2and a recent graduate of South Dakota State University in Brookings, SD, having earned a degree in human biology.3Next year, Tyler plans to attend medical school.He is a hard worker who has been dedicated to getting the most out of his internship experience.Thanks · 28 wordsI extend my sincere thanks and appreciation to Tyler for all of the fine work he has done and wish him continued success in the years to come.Thanks