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Steve Daines

313 words · 12 sentences · 16 clauses

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B+
Average 80 / 100
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Greeting 20%Claims 63%Positioning 14%Thanks 3%

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Madam President, Greeting · 29 wordstoday I have the distinct honor of recognizing Matt Lloyd for his decades of devotion to Montana and the Nation as he retires from 25 years of public service.1Greeting Claims · 167 wordsAfter graduating from the University of Illinois Urbana-Champaign, Matt began his journey in Washington, DC, 2as press secretary for U.S. Congressman Rick Hill and U.S. Congressman Kevin Brady.3 During the George W. Bush administration, Matt answered the call to serve and worked at the Department of Agriculture under Secretary Ann Veneman before returning to the U.S. House as communications director for Congressman Mike Pence, guiding the Congressman throughout his tenure in Congress and his campaign for Governor of Indiana.45 During the first Trump administration, Matt once again served in the executive branch, first as Principal Deputy Assistant Secretary for Public Affairs at the U.S. Department of Health and Human Services, then as Senior Advisor for Public Affairs at the U.S. Department of State, 67and finally as Principal Deputy Director for Public Affairs at the U.S. Department of Justice.8 His last role before coming to my office was deputy chief of staff and communications director for U.S. Senator Rob Portman.9 Matt started on Team Daines in January 2023.10 Positioning · 45 wordsAs my deputy chief of staff and communications director, he has provided principled and thoughtful counsel during a pivotal timespan in our Nation’s history. He has a sharp eye, a keen sense of the political current, and has been an integral member of my staff.Positioning Claims · 31 wordsThroughout it all, Matt has never lost sight of what matters most: being a loyal husband to his wife Amy and a great father to his two children Emmett and Charlotte. Greeting · 33 wordsAs Matt ends his time with Team Daines and his tenure in public service, I would like to congratulate him on his outstanding record and his devotion to both Montana and this Nation.Greeting Thanks · 8 wordsThank you for your service, Matt. ``Montana proud!’’Thanks

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