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John Thune

835 words · 40 sentences · 52 clauses

Statement grade
F
30 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Anecdote 18%Positioning 9%Claims 61%Procedure 9%Promise 3%

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Mr. President, Anecdote · 125 wordsa week or 2 ago, I came down to the floor and talked about growing up in a small town in South Dakota. As I said in those remarks, I carry those South Dakotans with me in a special way in my work here in Washington. When I consider bills or look at regulations, I think about what kind of impact they will have on those Americans, on hard-working people without a lot of extra money in the budget, on people living paycheck to paycheck or, as was the case with some of the farmers I grew up with, harvest to harvest. I think about how to ensure that government isn’t standing in their way or taking up all the extra money in their budget.Anecdote Positioning · 32 wordsAnd it was hard-working Americans like the South Dakotans I grew up with who were at the top of my mind when Republicans drafted our landmark tax relief legislation back in 2017.Positioning Claims · 118 wordsThe Tax Cuts and Jobs Act cut tax rates across the board, doubled the child tax credit, 1and nearly doubled the standard deduction.2 It put more money in hard- working Americans’ pockets, money that they were able to use for their particular needs--from childcare to home repairs, to medical bills, to a family vacation. And those same hard-working Americans were our focus last year when we passed the Working Families Tax Cuts. Our first aim with the Working Families Tax Cuts was making the 2017 tax relief permanent, 3and that is exactly what we did.Unearned certainty We made the lower tax rates permanent. We made the increased child tax credit permanent. And we made the increased standard deduction permanent. Procedure · 33 wordsBut that was just the beginning. We weren’t content with a permanent extension of the 2017 tax relief. We wanted to do more for working families, and so that is what we did.Procedure Claims · 70 wordsAs I said, our 2017 tax relief bill doubled the child tax credit. Well, the Working Families Tax Cuts not only made that permanent; it increased the child tax credit even further and then indexed it to inflation so its value will never go down.4 I said the Tax Cuts and Jobs Act nearly doubled the standard deduction. Well, the Working Families Tax Cuts boosted the standard deduction even further. Procedure · 5 wordsAnd we didn’t stop there.Procedure Claims · 45 wordsWe instituted two big new tax relief measures: no tax on tips, no tax on overtime.5 That meant major new tax relief for a whole host of working Americans--waiters, delivery people, bartenders, Uber and Lyft drivers, nurses, factory workers, paramedics, police officers, and many others. Procedure · 5 wordsAnd that still isn’t all.Procedure Claims · 41 wordsWe instituted a new $6,000 bonus deduction for seniors, 6and we created new tax-advantaged investment accounts to help parents save for their children’s future, starting with an initial $1,000 investment from the Federal Government for babies born between 2025 and 2028.7 Procedure · 22 wordsAnd that is far from the only thing we did to help the next generation get a headstart on their American dream.Procedure Claims · 237 wordsThe Working Families Tax Cuts also made some significant improvements to the traditional 529 education savings plan, allowing those savings to be used for a greater variety of education-related expenses, like tutoring or home school materials and vocational and continuing education.8 On the higher education side, we implemented accountability and reforms and put downward pressure on the cost of college degrees.Hidden agency We also made permanent a policy I authored that allows employers to pay off a portion of their employees’ student loans, without the employee having to pay taxes on the repayment amount.9 And on top of all that, we created the Workforce Pell Program, 10which will provide financial assistance to Americans in shorter term skills and career training programs, whether they are just starting out or looking to switch careers or develop new skills in their current field. This tax season, more than 35 million seniors claimed the new bonus deduction for older Americans.11 More than 29 million American workers were able to deduct overtime pay from their taxes, resulting in substantial tax savings.12 And more than 7.5 million workers deducted their tips on their taxes, ensuring they were able to keep more of their hard-earned money.13 And that is not to even mention the countless hard-working Americans who were able to take advantage of the increased standard deduction and the enhanced child tax credit. Tax refunds were up this season, 14and it is no surprise. Positioning · 9 wordsIt is the Working Families Tax Cuts at work.PositioningUnearned certainty Anecdote · 26 wordsI may live in Sioux Falls now, which is one of South Dakota’s bigger cities, but I spent a lot of time in smalltown South Dakota.Anecdote Positioning · 30 wordsAnd whenever I am there, I am proud to be able to share the details of the Working Families Tax Cuts and report that Republicans are delivering for working families.Positioning Promise · 26 wordsAnd we are going to continue to build on the Working Families Tax Cuts to expand opportunity and make life more affordable for hard- working Americans.Off pointVague promise Procedure · 11 wordsI yield the floor. I suggest the absence of a quorum.Procedure

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