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Statement grade
The average of Signal, Relevance and Clarity.
Average 69 / 100
Signal
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Relevance
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Respect
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Clarity
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Claims 43% Positioning 36% Procedure 6% Anecdote 13% The ask 2%
Structure · 23 steps
Claims · 8
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Mr. President, Claims · 16 words I rise in support of my legislation to end President Trump’s unauthorized, illegal war with Iran. Positioning · 53 words This war will go down in history as one of the greatest strategic failures in modern American history. Unearned certainty It was launched without a clear plan, executed without a coherent strategy, and has become a costly, self-inflicted disaster for the American people. Every justification that we were given for this conflict has proven hollow. Positioning Unearned certainty Claims · 89 words We were told that Iran’s nuclear program would be eliminated. Instead, Iran still holds nuclear material, 1 and its leaders may be more determined than ever to build a weapon. We were told that the Iranian regime would crumble; instead, it now holds new leverage of the world’s energy supply in the Strait of Hormuz.2 We were told this President would bring peace and lower prices; instead, he has given us war, pain, and higher prices. New York families are struggling to afford groceries and keep up with the rent, Positioning · 6 words and what is President Trump doing? Positioning Off point Claims · 57 words Pouring billions of tax dollars into an open-ended war in Iran. This reckless war is driving up monthly bills and making everyday life harder for working families. This administration demands billions for wars abroad, then claims we can’t afford to improve our schools or repair our roads or lower the cost of healthcare for millions of Americans. Positioning · 51 words President Trump has made it clear that he doesn’t factor in how Americans are doing financially, but the families I represent feel it every single day. Every time they fill the gas tank and watch the numbers climb, New Yorkers are being forced to pay a premium for this President’s instability. Positioning Off point Claims · 34 words According to data from the Joint Economic Committee, the average family has to pay an additional $432 on gas alone since this war began.3 Statewide, that is an extra $2 billion at the pump.4 Procedure · 4 words Let me repeat that. Procedure Claims · 18 words That is an extra $2 billion at the pump. Off point Nationwide, Americans have paid $60 billion more on gas.5 Anecdote · 41 words Every time I go home, I hear from constituents about their concerns: the cost of healthcare, the cost of gas, the cost to keep lights on, and put food on the table. Those are the conversations happening in kitchens across America. Anecdote Positioning · 17 words That is what we should be focused on here in Washington, not dropping bombs around the world. Positioning Off point Claims · 20 words And let us not forget there is a human cost to this war that no dollar figure could ever capture. Positioning · 21 words Our servicemembers did not volunteer to be pawns in a chaotic, unauthorized war with no plan and no end in sight. Positioning Claims · 24 words Eighteen American heroes have already paid the ultimate sacrifice.6 Eighteen families have been shattered. Just last week, New York lost one of our own: Anecdote · 47 words SGT Angel Rampersad of Queens.7 Sergeant Rampersad was a true patriot who begged her mother to let her enlist the moment she was old enough. She served this country courageously and honorably for more than 6 years before she was killed in an Iranian attack in Jordan.8 Anecdote Claims · 11 words Our servicemembers take one of the most dangerous jobs there is. Positioning · 50 words In return, we owe them a sacred obligation. We do not send them into harm’s way without a clear mission, defined objectives, and the support of the American people. The President’s war with Iran is a betrayal of that obligation. New Yorkers and all Americans deserve more. They deserve better. Positioning Procedure · 5 words So I ask my colleagues: Procedure Positioning · 36 words How many more servicemembers will we lose? How many more billions of dollars must families pay at the pump? How many more empty promises must be made from an out-of-control administration before this body finally acts? Positioning Claims · 12 words Under the Constitution, we have the power to end this war today. The ask · 13 words Let’s use it. I urge my colleagues to vote yes on this resolution. Procedure · 30 words I yield the floor. I suggest the absence of a quorum. The PRESIDING OFFICER (Ms. Lummis). The clerk will call the roll. The legislative clerk proceeded to call the roll. Procedure
At a glance
Lost points for Positioning ×19 Off point ×13 Procedure ×8 Anecdote ×7 Unearned certainty ×2
Little substance Much of this statement went to praise, blame, greetings, routine procedure or general stories rather than reasons, requests or specific points.
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Signal · 42
34 of 49 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “This war will go down in history as one of the greatest strategic failures in modern American history.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “It was launched without a clear plan, executed without a coherent strategy,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and has become a costly, self-inflicted disaster for the American people.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Every justification that we were given for this conflict has proven hollow.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and what is President Trump doing?” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “President Trump has made it clear that he doesn’t factor in how Americans are doing financially,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “but the families I represent feel it every single day.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Every time they fill the gas tank and watch the numbers climb, New Yorkers are being forced to pay a premium for this President’s instability.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “Let me repeat that.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “Every time I go home, I hear from constituents about their concerns:” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “the cost of healthcare, the cost of gas, the cost to keep lights on,” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “and put food on the table.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “Those are the conversations happening in kitchens across America.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “That is what we should be focused on here in Washington, not dropping bombs around the world.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “Our servicemembers did not volunteer to be pawns in a chaotic, unauthorized war with no plan and no end in sight.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “SGT Angel Rampersad of Queens.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “Sergeant Rampersad was a true patriot who begged her mother to let her enlist the moment she was old enough.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Anecdote A story that illustrates instead of making a point. What the tags mean → “She served this country courageously and honorably for more than 6 years before she was killed in an Iranian attack in Jordan.” An anecdote: it illustrates, it does not claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “In return, we owe them a sacred obligation.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “We do not send them into harm’s way without a clear mission, defined objectives,” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “and the support of the American people.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “The President’s war with Iran is a betrayal of that obligation.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “New Yorkers and all Americans deserve more.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “They deserve better.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “So I ask my colleagues:” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “How many more servicemembers will we lose?” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “How many more billions of dollars must families pay at the pump?” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “How many more empty promises must be made from an out-of-control administration before this body finally acts?” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “I yield the floor.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “I suggest the absence of a quorum.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “The PRESIDING OFFICER (Ms.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “Lummis).” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “The clerk will call the roll.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Procedure Throat-clearing: announcing what you are about to say, or the House’s routine business. What the tags mean → “The legislative clerk proceeded to call the roll.” Procedure or throat-clearing: no claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · 73
13 of 49 deductions are Relevance
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the bill under debate.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “New York families are struggling to afford groceries and keep up with the rent,” Turns from the war powers question to a general affordability complaint about groceries and rent.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and what is President Trump doing?” A rhetorical jab about the President rather than anything about the resolution’s directive.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “This administration demands billions for wars abroad, then claims we can’t afford to improve our schools or repair our roads or lower the cost of healthcare for millions of Americans.” Argues for domestic spending priorities over war funding, a policy debate beyond what the resolution does.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “President Trump has made it clear that he doesn’t factor in how Americans are doing financially,” Attacks the President’s concern for Americans’ finances rather than addressing the resolution.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “but the families I represent feel it every single day.” Speaks to her constituents’ feelings, not to the merits or text of the resolution.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Every time they fill the gas tank and watch the numbers climb, New Yorkers are being forced to pay a premium for this President’s instability.” Blames gas prices on the President’s instability rather than engaging the war powers question itself.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Let me repeat that.” A rhetorical repetition device with no content on the resolution.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “That is an extra $2 billion at the pump.” Restates the pump figure again without advancing the resolution argument.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Every time I go home, I hear from constituents about their concerns:” Anecdote about constituent conversations unrelated to the resolution’s directive.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “the cost of healthcare, the cost of gas, the cost to keep lights on,” Lists domestic cost concerns rather than addressing the war powers question.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “and put food on the table.” Continues the list of kitchen-table costs away from the resolution.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “Those are the conversations happening in kitchens across America.” Commentary on national mood, not the resolution.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “That is what we should be focused on here in Washington, not dropping bombs around the world.” Urges a general spending focus in Washington rather than what the resolution directs.
Respect · no score
Not checked: graded before this measurement existed. Excluded from the average.
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Clarity · 93
2 of 49 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Unearned certainty Something stated as certain with nothing to back it. What the tags mean → “will go down in history as one of the greatest strategic failures” A verdict on history is asserted as settled without any source or standard.
Unearned certainty Something stated as certain with nothing to back it. What the tags mean → “has proven hollow” Certainty that all justifications failed is stated as an established fact rather than cited evidence.
Claims · 8
This list shows the factual statements you can check for yourself: the words as said, and the claim restated to stand on its own.
1 “Iran still holds nuclear material” Iran still holds nuclear material following the U.S. war with Iran. search
2 “it now holds new leverage of the world’s energy supply in the Strait of Hormuz” Iran now holds new leverage over the world’s energy supply in the Strait of Hormuz. search
3 “the average family has to pay an additional $432 on gas alone since this war began” According to Joint Economic Committee data, the average family has paid an additional $432 on gas since the war with Iran began. search
4 “an extra $2 billion at the pump” New York State families have paid an extra $2 billion at the gas pump since the war with Iran began. search
5 “Americans have paid $60 billion more on gas” Americans nationwide have paid $60 billion more on gas since the war with Iran began. search
6 “Eighteen American heroes have already paid the ultimate sacrifice” Eighteen American servicemembers have died in the war with Iran. search
7 “SGT Angel Rampersad of Queens” Sergeant Angel Rampersad of Queens, New York, was recently killed in the war with Iran. search
8 “served this country courageously and honorably for more than 6 years before she was killed in an Iranian attack in Jordan” Sergeant Angel Rampersad served more than 6 years in the U.S. military and was killed in an Iranian attack in Jordan. search