Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Laura Gillen

177 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

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Average 94 / 100
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Claims 75%Positioning 4%Promise 7%The ask 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 106 wordsI rise today to celebrate the legacy of Detective Luis Alvarez and the advancement of a bill to rename his hometown post office in Oceanside in his honor.1 Detective Alvarez was a true American hero and bravely answered the call on 9/11 after the worst terror attack on American soil. He spent months searching for survivors among the toxic rubble at Ground Zero and, as a result of his exposure, received a cancer diagnosis in 2016.2 He continued his legacy of service and became a leading advocate for 9/11 first responders, famously appearing before Congress in 2019 to fight for the September 11th Victim Compensation Fund.3 Positioning · 7 wordsDetective Alvarez represents the best of us, PositioningPromise · 12 wordsand we must ensure that his heroism and sacrifice are never forgotten.Vague promise Claims · 27 wordsI am proud to say that my bill to rename the Oceanside Post Office is supported by the Alvarez family and the entire New York House delegation.4 The ask · 25 wordsI am urging the Speaker to act quickly and bring the legislation to the floor to honor Detective Alvarez ahead of the 9/11 25th anniversary.

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