Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Sydney Kamlager-Dove

161 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 98 / 100
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The ask 32%Claims 68%

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Mr. Speaker, The ask · 20 wordsI rise today to once again demand that ICE immediately provide my constituent, Carlitos Ricardo Parias, urgently needed medical care. Claims · 96 wordsCarlitos is a father, husband, and volunteer in our community who was even recognized by city council for his service.1 Last October, ICE shot Carlitos near his elbow.2 He received initial care at a hospital, 3but since being transferred to the Adelanto ICE facility in December, ICE has denied him proper care for the injury they caused.45 I visited Carlitos in late May.6 His hand was purple, his fingers were atrophied, and he is experiencing headaches and nerve pain. I am worried that he may have a bone infection and that his arm could be amputated. The ask · 12 wordsCarlitos urgently needs medical attention, and many more at Adelanto do, too. Claims · 14 wordsLast week, a Federal judge ordered sweeping changes to improve Adelanto’s conditions for detainees.7 The ask · 19 wordsIt is time for ICE to comply with this judge’s orders and end this cruelty at Adelanto and nationwide.

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