The average of Signal, Reasoning and Clarity. Reasoning rests on 2 conclusions, too few to hold the grade down.
Average 98 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
The ask 32%Claims 68%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, The ask · 20 wordsI rise today to once again demand that ICE immediately provide my constituent, Carlitos Ricardo Parias, urgently needed medical care.Claims · 96 wordsCarlitos is a father, husband, and volunteer in our community who was even recognized by city council for his service.1Last October, ICE shot Carlitos near his elbow.2He received initial care at a hospital, 3but since being transferred to the Adelanto ICE facility in December, ICE has denied him proper care for the injury they caused.45I visited Carlitos in late May.6His hand was purple, his fingers were atrophied, and he is experiencing headaches and nerve pain.I am worried that he may have a bone infection and that his arm could be amputated.The ask · 12 wordsCarlitos urgently needs medical attention, and many more at Adelanto do, too.Claims · 14 wordsLast week, a Federal judge ordered sweeping changes to improve Adelanto’s conditions for detainees.7The ask · 19 wordsIt is time for ICE to comply with this judge’s orders and end this cruelty at Adelanto and nationwide.