Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Ayanna Pressley

259 words · 14 sentences · 27 clauses

Statement grade
B+
Average 84 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 12%Claims 61%Positioning 7%Anecdote 6%The ask 11%Thanks 3%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 32 wordsI rise today on behalf of my family--my husband, Conan, and our daughter, Cora--and the city of Boston and the Commonwealth of Massachusetts to honor the life of Pastor Byron Christopher Sumner.Greeting Claims · 44 wordsA beloved son of Roxbury, Chris deserved to grow old, but he transitioned on July 5 due to complications from ALS.1 He excelled from a young age in athletics, particularly basketball, which brought him to Canada, where he earned scholarships and eventually played semi-pro.2 Positioning · 10 wordsHis commitment, talent, agility, and strength went beyond the court.Positioning Claims · 72 wordsHe returned to Boston, where he devoted his career to serving his community as executive director of the I Have a Dream program, Blue Hill Boys & Girls Club, Boston TenPoint Coalition, 3and St. Stephen’s Youth Programs.4 His final role was an appointment from Governor Healey as executive director of the Melnea A.5 Cass Recreation Center, what he often called his dream job. Chris’ true passion was his family and his faith. Anecdote · 16 wordsI have said so often, I would rather see a sermon than hear one any day.Anecdote Positioning · 7 wordsChris was a sermon, the best kind.Positioning Claims · 43 wordsHe married his wife, Katani, in 1985, 6and they raised three beautiful children: 7Kandice, Kortney, and Kristian. He also faithfully served as executive director and executive pastor of Jubilee Christian Church, supporting our community with spiritual covering, stewardship, 8and, most of all, joy. The ask · 28 wordsAs we grieve his loss, may we move forward in service of our children, young adults, families, and elders, or, as Chris would say, our city’s treasured assets. Thanks · 7 wordsMay he rest peacefully in eternal rest.Thanks

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