Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Andrea Salinas

179 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 85 / 100
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Claims 51%Reasoning 22%The ask 15%Promise 12%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 31 words57 years ago this week, the world watched as Neil Armstrong and Buzz Aldrin first stepped foot on the Moon.1 That historic achievement was thanks to American innovation and engineering breakthroughs, Reasoning · 12 wordsand it showed what is possible when we dream beyond the stars. Claims · 60 wordsNow, 57 years later, we are preparing for our return to the Moon. Through NASA’s Artemis program, the U.S. will once again set foot on the Moon, opening the door for the next era of space exploration.2 But missions like Artemis would not be possible without the skilled technical workers, scientists, and innovators whose talent turns bold ideas into reality. Reasoning · 28 wordsIf America is to remain the world’s scientific leader, we must continue investing in the programs and inspiring the next generation of students who make these missions possible.Vague promise The ask · 27 wordsThat is why I urge my colleagues to pass my resolution that would recognize July 20, the day the astronauts landed on the Moon, 3as Moon Day. Mr. Speaker, Promise · 21 wordsI will keep working to support policies that get us one small step closer to the next giant leap for mankind.Vague promise

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