Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Austin Scott

890 words · 55 sentences · 72 clauses

Statement grade
B
Average 77 / 100
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Thanks 7%Procedure 2%Anecdote 26%Reasoning 7%Claims 41%Positioning 13%The ask 4%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 41 wordsthe first thing I will do is thank Chairman Smith and his staff for working with me to get this piece of legislation to the floor. I also thank the many bipartisan cosponsors of the Purple Heart Freedom to Work Act.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 11 wordsI want Americans to know how this piece of legislation originated.Procedure Anecdote · 126 wordsI was taking a young man, a marine, hunting several years ago. That marine stepped on a pressure plate and lost both legs. We were having a discussion as we were in the vehicle headed to the farm that we were going to hunt, and I asked him if there were things that we could help him with. We had a candid conversation. He said that he wanted to go back to work. He worked at the local auto parts store and wanted to work more hours, but if he made $1 more than, at that time, the $1,100 a month, he would lose 100 percent of his Social Security benefits.1 Here, we have a young, combat-wounded man who lost both legs and wants to work.Anecdote Procedure · 5 wordsLet me tell you something: ProcedureReasoning · 22 wordsIf you want to help a disabled veteran, let them get out of the house and go back to work. Let them. Claims · 10 wordsThis doesn’t force anybody to do anything. It is voluntary. Reasoning · 41 wordsThe idea that if a combat-wounded veteran wants to go back to work and they make $1 more than some imaginary number, then their family has less money at the end of the month than if they didn’t work is ridiculous. Claims · 156 wordsSo we wrote the Purple Heart Freedom to Work Act. I have had broad bipartisan support for that bill, but I have not been able to get it through and signed into law. We went back, under Chairman Smith’s leadership and with his team, and looked at other ways to do this. This authority was there, up to and until 2022, I believe.2 President Biden had it and could have done it.Off point Other Presidents have had the ability to do it. We are simply asking that we do the same thing, give the same authority that we have had in the past so that we can do pilot projects. It doesn’t force anybody to do anything. It gives people who are currently receiving Social Security disability benefits the ability to go back to work if they voluntarily choose to, in order to have a little more money at the end of the month instead of less. Procedure · 5 wordsThat is what it does.Procedure Positioning · 26 wordsI don’t understand the objection from the other side in allowing people to go back to work and not lose 100 percent of their government benefits.PositioningOff point Claims · 25 wordsIt is something that we, as Republicans, have pressed for across a wide range of benefits, and that is to get rid of the cliff. Positioning · 10 wordsWe are not trying to force anybody to do anything.Positioning Claims · 33 wordsWe are simply giving people the ability to go back to work, not lose 100 percent of their Social Security benefits, and have more money left over at the end of the month. Anecdote · 53 wordsAfter my conversation with that young man, that young marine, that warrior, I honestly couldn’t believe it. I came to D.C., and I met with the lawyers. I said, this can’t be right. This defies logic. We went through the law. The lawyers told me he was right, and we wrote the bill.Anecdote Positioning · 36 wordsI am going to tell you, I am disappointed that my Democratic colleagues are taking the position on the floor that they have with this.Off point We want people to be able to go back to work.Positioning Anecdote · 54 wordsThis originated with a marine who stepped on a pressure plate, lost both legs, and wants to go back to work. If they go back to work, they lose 100 percent of their Social Security benefits if they make $1 more than this imaginary threshold, which is not enough for them to live on.Anecdote Positioning · 9 wordsI think this is a wonderful piece of legislation.Positioning Thanks · 17 wordsI thank the chairman and his staff for helping us find a way to solve this problem.Thanks Claims · 34 wordsI think the President will do a pilot project--if you give him the authority--that will be very close to the Purple Heart Freedom to Work Act. Purple Heart Day is coming up August 7.3 Positioning · 24 wordsIt will be wonderful for us to get this across the finish line and be able to do it on that day for them.Positioning The ask · 24 wordsI hope my colleagues, in a very bipartisan manner, will support H.R. 8884 and help us remove the barriers to work for disabled Americans.4 Claims · 66 wordsThe same things that will work for our wounded warriors will also work for other Americans, if they choose, if they want, if they volunteer, if they voluntarily want to go back to work and make a little extra money, and not lose 100 percent of their Social Security benefits. The Purple Heart Freedom to Work, I think it will work for a lot of Americans. Positioning · 7 wordsWe, as Republicans, believe work is good.Positioning Claims · 41 wordsWe know there are a lot of people that are on Social Security disability that want to go back to work.Unearned certainty It is voluntary. They will always have more money. They will not have any less money if this is done. The ask · 14 wordsAgain, I hope my colleagues, in a very bipartisan manner, will support H.R. 8884.

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