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Analilia Mejia

171 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Statement grade
A
Average 92 / 100
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Greeting 15%Claims 85%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 20 wordsI rise to honor one of the newest inductees to the New Jersey Lacrosse Hall of Fame, Mr. Matt Trevenen.1Greeting Claims · 126 wordsA graduate of Montclair High School, he is one of the most decorated attackmen at Montclair.2 He was a two-time first team all-State selection, a two-time Lacrosse all-American, 3and a two-time New Jersey Attackman of the Year.4 In 1998, Mr. Trevenen was named the Star-Ledger New Jersey State Player of The Year and the first player in State history to record two 100-point seasons.5 He currently still holds or shares six individual Montclair records.6 As if that wasn’t enough, he went on to Princeton where he was a 3- year starter and a member of the 2001 NCAA championship team.7 In 1999, he was one of five New Jersey players selected to the U.S.A.8 Lacrosse U-19 National Team, which captured the World Championship in Adelaide, Australia.9 Mr. Speaker, Claims · 20 wordssince retiring as a player, Mr. Trevenen dedicated himself as a coach and a leader in Glen Ridge, New Jersey. Greeting · 5 wordsI rise to celebrate him.Greeting

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