Analysis · Floor speech · beta

Madeleine Dean

181 words · 12 sentences · 15 clauses

Statement grade
D+
Average 50 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 10%Claims 24%Anecdote 54%Reasoning 7%Promise 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 18 wordsPrivate First Class Isabella Gonzales, First Lieutenant Tyler James Feehan, Sergeant Angel Rampersad, and Sergeant Michael Emmanuel Swinton.Thanks Mr. Speaker, Claims · 23 wordsit has been 5 months since President Trump started his reckless war with Iran, 1 week since these young servicemembers lost their lives.1Unearned certainty Anecdote · 97 wordsIsabella, only 19, was graduated from Hebron High School in Texas last year.2 Her friends remember her as outgoing and how she pushed herself through boot camp to prove her bravery. Angel had a smile her loved ones say lit up every room she entered. She had plans to travel the world. Tyler, at 25, leaves behind his family and a community at Southern Utah University.3 He was mere weeks away from finishing his MBA.4 Michael leaves behind his wife Mia.5 In the last photo of Michael, he is holding his daughter in his arms before deployment.Anecdote Claims · 21 wordsEighteen American troops are dead, 6and more than 400 are wounded, all in the name of an ill-conceived and ill-begotten war.7 Reasoning · 12 wordsDropping more bombs on Iran is no way to remember these heroes, Promise · 10 wordsand if our President won’t say their names, I will.

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